Prototype Feedback

The following is feedback received from my latest presentation and will be take in to account for the final presentation.
Don't include the date of left handers day in presentation.
Go in to further detail of how my website is made.
Make the finished game a clearer goal and focus more on its creation.
Split main and deliverable aim in to different slides with more detail.
Show examples of content made for left handers day before and explain what I think of it.
Test.
Don't rely on notes.

It has been far too long since I posted something with substance.
I have since handed up my final proposal and am currently working on a prototype for the prototype presentation on 20/11/2014.
I am making my prototype in flash. the purpose of my prototype is to show how the user will use the games several  screens.
Below are several screenshots of progress and coding used. Note there is no graphics here since i didn't want to add anything that will be in the final project. Also several pages will be blank since they will be 3d animations on the final project.